Write a story together

The thirdgraders have been practicing writing in english. Together they have written two stories about a donkey.

 

Mr Donkey

Once upon a time, there was a donkey. His name was mr Donkey. He lived on a meadow. He lived with his parents.

One day mr Donkey was hit by a bicycle. He injured his leg. The driver jumped off the bicycle and called the vet. The vet came in her car. Mr Donkeys parents came too and they were worried. The vet jumped off the car and looked at mr Donkeys leg. Mr

Donkeys leg was hurt but the vet put on a bandage. Then mr Donkey got wings and flied up the donkey heaven. The parents got wings too and flied up to the heaven together with mr Donkey.

 

Louie and Isabelle

Once upon a time, there was a donkey. His name was Louie. He loved to run. His favorite food was grass and carrots. He loved to play with his tail.

Louie was happy until some people took him. They locked him in a small cage. After a couple of hours they let him out and they loaded him with heavy things to carry. Louie had to walk in the desert to the angry King. The King put him in a cage. Louie was forced to sit in the cage for a hole week. Then the King took Louie out of the cage.

One day another donkey came to the cage. They became friends. Her name was Isabelle.

One day when they were working they talked about running away. Louie and Isabelle carried heavy things at a market. But one woman who worked at a sanctuary saw them and she took them away to her sanctuary. Louie and Isabelle were the happiest luckiest donkeys. They could eat as much carrots they wanted.

 

 

 

 

 

Some more descriptions!

Read more of the secongraders descriptions of themselves!

Hello
My name is Inas.
I am 8 years old.
I live in Hallsberg.
I have brown eyes.
I have black hear
Today im wearing a black sweatshirt whit hearts and black trousers with hearts.
Goodbye!

 

Hello
My namne is Pedro. I am 8 years old.
I live in Hallsberg.
I have brown eyes.
I have dark hair.
I have short hair.
Today I am wearing darkgreen sweatshirt and darkblue trousers.
Bye bye!

 

Hello
My name is Eddie. I am 8 years old. I live in Hallsberg.
I have blue eyes. I have light hair.
I have short hair.
Today I am wearing grey pants, black t-shirt, black socks and a clock.
Goodbye!

 

Hello
My name is Ariam. I am 8 years old.
I live in Hallsberg.
I have brown eyes.
I have dark hair.
I have long hair.
Today I am wearing a grey sweatshirt, grey pants and yellow socks .
Goodbye!

Descriptions

Under “Descriptions” you can read these texts and more from the second graders:

Hello
My name is Vincent.
I am 8 years old.
I live in Hallsberg.
I have blue eyes
I have light hair.
I have short hair.
Today I am wearing a red jacket and grey pants. Bye bye

 

Hello
My name is Nour. I am 8 years old.I live in Hallsberg.
I have brown eyes. I have dark hair.
I have short hair.
Today I am wearing an orange black vest sweatshirt and black pants.
Bye bye !

 

Hello
My name is Nelly. I am 8 years old .I live in Hallsberg.
I have brown eyes.
I have brown hair.
I have long short hair.
Today I am wearing blue jeans, yellow hooded jacket and a purple t-shirt.

Bye bye

 

Hello
My name is Natalie. I am 7 years old.
I live in Hallsberg.
I have brown eyes. I have black hair.
I have long hair. Today I am wearing a grey sweatshirt and
purple pants.
Bye Bye