Write a story together

The thirdgraders have been practicing writing in english. Together they have written two stories about a donkey.

 

Mr Donkey

Once upon a time, there was a donkey. His name was mr Donkey. He lived on a meadow. He lived with his parents.

One day mr Donkey was hit by a bicycle. He injured his leg. The driver jumped off the bicycle and called the vet. The vet came in her car. Mr Donkeys parents came too and they were worried. The vet jumped off the car and looked at mr Donkeys leg. Mr

Donkeys leg was hurt but the vet put on a bandage. Then mr Donkey got wings and flied up the donkey heaven. The parents got wings too and flied up to the heaven together with mr Donkey.

 

Louie and Isabelle

Once upon a time, there was a donkey. His name was Louie. He loved to run. His favorite food was grass and carrots. He loved to play with his tail.

Louie was happy until some people took him. They locked him in a small cage. After a couple of hours they let him out and they loaded him with heavy things to carry. Louie had to walk in the desert to the angry King. The King put him in a cage. Louie was forced to sit in the cage for a hole week. Then the King took Louie out of the cage.

One day another donkey came to the cage. They became friends. Her name was Isabelle.

One day when they were working they talked about running away. Louie and Isabelle carried heavy things at a market. But one woman who worked at a sanctuary saw them and she took them away to her sanctuary. Louie and Isabelle were the happiest luckiest donkeys. They could eat as much carrots they wanted.